Below Poem by madison ann

Below

Rating: 5.0


Underneath what everyone sees A girl so happy a girl so right
Is a girl freaking out losing her flight
Because underneath is someone new
Is someone so different but what can you do?
She smiles and laughs for the people who see
But who they see isn't who she can be
She seems so perfect the poeple say
But they dont know the things she does everyday
She fights urges to make her.feel okay
But if she.does she knowz what they'll say
Occasionally she fails but tries to regain
But theres nothing and no one who knows her pain

If people understood whY she did and why
Would they even wonder.why she does. Cry
If she keeps doing but will never say
Shell keep doing.it everydayy

She wishes and wonders when she will quit
But In her head nothin. Will fit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kathrin P. 05 November 2012

yeah I really like this poem. it's what I feel :) very nice

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Madison Ann 25 September 2012

Thanks means alot(:

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In Abubakr 02 July 2012

Hi Madison :) ..i read all your poems, i found them really interesting for a 14 year old..almost every girl can relate to them.keep on writing! bravo :)

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Karen Sinclair 30 June 2012

So sad yet understandable... every day you raise brush your knees down, replace the fixed smile mask and soldier on... i think theres a bit of everyone in this... bravo on a write of honesty... karen

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