Believers Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Believers

Rating: 3.8


You can see thee existence
Maybe lies in the half a way!
Where it comes from, even
What does it say to thee?
Ambiguous, when you try to realize
through nature and super nature
'O' I have discovered the origin
and cause of tears and laughs
You can try you will be-
Through the path where
believers can run-

- Shaleheen,9th April,2013

Tuesday, April 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,truth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Believers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 25 April 2013

An interesting poem, very thought provoking, good write!

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Madina Morris 20 April 2013

It was alright, i felt like you left out a lot of details. Next time try adding a little...zing lol

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