Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 851 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Believers


You can see thee existence
Maybe lies in the half a way!
Where it comes from, even
What does it say to thee?
Ambiguous, when you try to realize
through nature and super nature
'O' I have discovered the origin
and cause of tears and laughs
You can try you will be-
Through the path where
believers can run-

- Shaleheen,9th April,2013

Submitted: Tuesday, April 09, 2013
Edited: Monday, March 17, 2014

Topic of this poem: Faith


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  • Silver Star - 4,069 Points Hazel Durham (4/25/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    An interesting poem, very thought provoking, good write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madina Morris (4/20/2013 3:41:00 PM)

    It was alright, i felt like you left out a lot of details. Next time try adding a little...zing lol (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,147 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/19/2013 9:41:00 PM)

    Not sure where you are going Musfiq. Existence and the question of What is it trying to examine and come to
    a satisfactory conclusion by nature and super nature? But only in true believers can that be answered?
    That is my best shot. (Report) Reply

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