Believe In Me? Poem by Angelic Warrior

Believe In Me?

Rating: 3.9


If I told you I tried real hard
would you believe me?
If I spoke to you about how I feel
would you believe me?
If I spilled everything
would you believe me?
If I showed you my dream world
would you believe me?
If I painted my life on a page
would you believe me?
If I danced the dangerous game that I play
would you believe me?
If I never lied once
would you believe me?
If I gave my all
would you believe me?

Why is it that when I give you my only truth you never believe in me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adi Cox 10 July 2009

This poem addresses the problems and comlexities of communication in relationships. Sometimes it is impossible to believe someone. If I said 'I am a liar' would you beleive me? This is a paradox. Nice poem.10/10.

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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

believe in me and trust..believe in me and stay..believe in me and let's enjoy together the life..this is a beautiful poem..grace

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sky dreams 14 June 2009

this reminds me of my relationship with my father.. very good thoughts expressed very well.10

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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Thanks for the share of this wonderful piece...this gives much to reflect on...thank you...well penned

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