Believe Heart Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Believe Heart

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How does heart gets infusion?
There is lot of confusion
Everybody thinks of this part
To be always sensitive and piece of an art

If eyes weep, it is blamed
If person feels bad, it is shamed
It may always blame good feeling
With no response for being so good

Blood flows in vanes with its existence
Always regular supply to heart not by chance
It is great deal to keep in healthy condition
Keep all cards to chest without any question

Blood flows for no simple reason
It has loving heart with special position
Heart makes it cheerful occasion
Only needs little smile for confession

What can really be not told?
When heart is completely sold
In someone’s love to believe
That it is real life to live

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

How does heart gets infusion? There is lot of confusion

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

quiet_outsider26 minutes ago Life is what you make of it, i like the metaphors and stanza composition, but it has a choppy flow about it when I try reading it. could just be me, but it's groovy!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

good job, keep writing Carmine Ferrara17 minutes ago I enjoyed the feelings expressed, I would like to see a little more balance, nice work Comment +1 Nihilism goodness

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Zoraida Rivera15 minutes ago keep sharing.........

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Great poem which I like quite a lot.. The theme has been well dealt with. Stanley Collymore28 minutes ago Good work. Comment 0 ... ..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Pramod Hiwrekar wah! ! medical ki kitabein aaj shrmsaar ho gayi...haha 9 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcoem ericel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Rohani Daud Very beautiful words..Yes only true love can stop the blood flow in the heart.. 14 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Good Raymond Parfitt15 minutes ago Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Good krishna Middela14 minutes ago Good Comment +1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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