Belief Poem by asef fakih

Belief

Rating: 4.8


Would it be weird
if the long and lonely path of life
seemed like a glimpse
of what I expect.
The vocal controversy of beliefs
gets tired of useless debate.
I surely don't feel right.
I feel insecure from my own logic.
Tragic stories seem funny while
I think, what if,
the sky one day was not promised
to fall apart, the sun was not
promised to burn out.
Belief of future is far beyond life,
It never binds us
to the blue, beloved planet,
but it makes us love our life more.
The life of a non believer fades
they do not see,
no site, no visions of the promised land.
They are the fading shadows.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 19 October 2008

powerful expression! nice imagery..........10+++

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Maria C. Pires Costa 14 October 2008

Dear Asef, Being so young you've been enlightened for writing such relevant thoughts! Keep up with your poem writing and you'll surely open gleaming 'paths of life' for all of us to walk through.

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Ershad Mazumder 13 October 2008

Very good dear asef. Poetry is a dream. Keep people dreaming. Greatest dream will be a greatest poem. Thanks.

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asef fakih

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Dhaka, Bangladesh
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