Being So. Poem by Y Sunita Devi
Being So.
As you care for your love,
I too care the same way.
As you feel excited to see your love,
I too feel the same way.
As your heart beat fast,
I too can feel my heart beating.
As you can’t imagine a day,
Without your love..
I too can’t imagine,
As you feel anguish,
When your love is far.
I too feel the same pain.
As you feel for your love,
I too feel for mine.
As you wish for your love,
I too wish for mine.
As you cry in pain without,
I too do the same.
As you can’t imagine a life without,
I too cant imagine the same.
You claim your love to be true,
pure like the morning dew.
Valuing it the most,
Above anything else.
But you are so untrue,
When you say my love to be untrue.
You make faces,
And pass cruel comments
When I say about my love,
You do so not knowing,
That I too feel the same way,
With the same depth and feel in my heart,
As you do for your love.
23/06/09
N.B(About those who are not Straight in sexual orientation and the world they face with it.)
You claim your love to be true, pure like the morning dew. Valuing it the most, Above anything else. But you are so untrue, When you say my love to be untrue. heartfelt imaginations and well written poem with rich and soul touching idea has expressed here with perfect way..well done..I really liked it very much and appreciate you dear friend..best of luck 10++++++++++++++++
Very sensible message there...people always tend to downgrade others feels...good write Winnie...thanks...10
'You make faces, And pass cruel comments When I say about my love, You do so not knowing, That I too feel the same way, With the same depth and feel in my heart, As you do for your love.' Soft and lovely and touching piece.
ahhh dear t was tooo touchin....te way lines talkin abt both feelings awesome....n te line speakin abt ' untrue ' was a sweet way of pointin te wrong btwn lovin hearts.........i can rank this as one of yur most good works............loved it wit full heart....100++++++ sebastine
You have poured out your emotions in this poem, all within the confines of poetry which is done so well. Thank God for writing I often say! Well done! 10 Karin Anderson
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Wonderful expression used to paint your hearts voice....tenderly penned my dear Winnie...........keep penning....you have a gift