Being In Poetic World Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Being In Poetic World

Rating: 4.8


Your passion, not that I don’t like it;
But at times, turn out to be out of wit
Your tickle, caress and cuddle, I do admit
Honestly, I esteem and enjoy true to heart

It is my innate enthusiasm towards you
That kept my spirits up that much more
It‘s the biological tie between I and you
That made us inseparable ‘n indivisible too

You and I are ever being one, never be two
You are a part of me and I am part of you, too
Yet, let me tell you, in undiminished woo
Honey, you befall annoying, seldom though

When you keep nudging me over trivial subjects
I have pondered, in vain to oblige, nonetheless
Many a nights you kept me rolling, being obsessed
Robbing of my much needed good night’s sleep

Days and days I have wasted, sorry to say so
Tried obliging your excitement, in hard peddled go
True, many a times, we accomplished; never say no
For which I am truly grateful, which you know

You are a thirst, burning desire, and rambling greed
A zest, a taste, delight and gusto, never feel freed
More I engage, more I crave it, as is with creed
My poetic hunger, I love you honey, you’re my heed

Sunday, March 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In respect of the World Poetry Day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2017

Poetic desire is very passionate but true. This enhances beauty of creativity. Your poetic hunger is wise and you love this as honey. Poetry's tickle, caress and cuddle, we do admit. Amazing perceptional poem is shared is wisely penned.10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 15 September 2017

Thanks very much Kumar for the unequivocal comment of yours.

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Navod Dilhara 24 February 2016

Slow rhyming. well, the poem is extraordinary in deed.. Written in a powerful picturesque language.!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 24 February 2016

Thank you ET for your hearty comment.

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 29 November 2015

Being a poet is very interesting............. just as being an engineer; you are always trying to be creative and constantly in a contestant race with yourself. This is good rhyming and messaging! tfs! ! !

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 December 2015

Thank you Akanji for your observations and comment.

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Walterrean Salley 09 July 2015

When you keep nudging me over trivial subjects I have pondered, in vain to oblige, nonetheless Many a nights you kept me rolling, being obsessed Robbing of my much needed good night’s sleep As someone has said, it's an itch that's hard to scratch. Yes, poetry is real. Enjoyed this piece very much. Thanks.m

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Thank you Salley, for your laudable comment.

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Valsa George 23 March 2015

When we are filled with poetic passion, many a time we are pushed into a restless state! On certain nights, poetic thoughts come crowding and we are unable to put them in the right order or in flowing rhythm. Then we grow restless and sleep deserts us! Poetry sometimes leaves us as an unsatisfied lover, though there is an inseparable bond between a poet and his art! A great write!

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Valsa, It's a great thing to have a comment from you, 'cos, even from that I learn something. Thank you so much!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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