Being In Love Poem by Vizard Dhawan

Being In Love

Rating: 4.7


we are now together
we exchanged our heart
with each other
we truly love
one another
with patience and little fear...
but O my dear..
are we here..?
I think no...
I too am burning
in the same fire
I am just learning
the way to love, from you
and I am not a liar
we are in love
and out of this world
far away from loneliness
even though we live
among people of mind curled
I am preparing myself
to fulfil all your needs
you don't know yourself
that I am feeing guilty
for all my bad deeds
my deeds that hurt you
that brought tears in your eyes
but O my dear! I love you
and for you I can even wait
sitting up above the SKIES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken Kerr 16 November 2012

Hi Vizard Enjoyed your poem. Especially liked the lines, ' I too am burning / in the same fire'. Well Done. Thank you for your comment on my Poem on Childhood. Best Wishes

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Anoop Nair 12 March 2013

Nice.Looks like very sincere too

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Neela Nath Das 12 June 2013

Beautiful poem Vishal.Praiseworthy.

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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013

a beautiful love poem. very emotional.

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2013

Another great poem with such honesty, you write from your heart so beautifully! !

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Vishal Sharma 24 February 2016

time is our foe thus i let her go

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Vishal Sharma 13 November 2015

hope i erase this poetry from my memory

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Vishal Sharma 12 October 2015

waitin up from the skies i she dont even receive my phone

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Vishal Sharma 11 September 2015

Memories msy kill me

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Vishal Sharma 13 August 2013

actually i share this poem with my love god bless her

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