Vizard Dhawan


Being In Love - Poem by Vizard Dhawan

we are now together
we exchanged our heart
with each other
we truly love
one another
with patience and little fear...
but O my dear..
are we here..?
I think no...
I too am burning
in the same fire
I am just learning
the way to love, from you
and I am not a liar
we are in love
and out of this world
far away from loneliness
even though we live
among people of mind curled
I am preparing myself
to fulfil all your needs
you don't know yourself
that I am feeing guilty
for all my bad deeds
my deeds that hurt you
that brought tears in your eyes
but O my dear! I love you
and for you I can even wait
sitting up above the SKIES


Comments about Being In Love by Vizard Dhawan

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (8/13/2013 3:15:00 AM)

    actually i share this poem with my love
    god bless her (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,770 Points Heather Wilkins (6/25/2013 6:36:00 PM)

    a beautiful love poem. very emotional. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,625 Points Neela Nath (6/12/2013 2:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Vishal.Praiseworthy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anoop Nair (3/12/2013 4:37:00 AM)

    Nice.Looks like very sincere too (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,370 Points Hazel Durham (1/1/2013 11:31:00 AM)

    Another great poem with such honesty, you write from your heart so beautifully! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ken Kerr (11/16/2012 4:18:00 AM)

    Hi Vizard
    Enjoyed your poem. Especially liked the lines, ' I too am burning / in the same fire'. Well Done.
    Thank you for your comment on my Poem on Childhood.
    Best Wishes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (11/16/2012 3:00:00 AM)

    Very beautiful write indeed. The last three lines are so lovely
    but O my dear! I love you
    and for you I can even wait
    sitting up above the SKIES (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 15, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, November 16, 2012


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