Beginings Poem by Lawanya Wijesekara

Beginings

Rating: 5.0


The sun sets miles afar
The misty mountain
drifts into the background
cool climes merge
with the hot humid air

and.... Here I start
The beginning of
many Leaving...
Leaving the
memories
of many Beginnings

Beginings
Saturday, June 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: home,leaving
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Leaving home
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 18 June 2016

'The sun sets miles afar The misty mountain drifts into the background cool climes merge with the hot humid air' loved this, loved your style, appropriately repeated in poem after poem again 10+

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 18 June 2016

Yet another wonderful allegory. Enjoy reading. Thanks.

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Thank You [3

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 June 2016

The sun sets miles afar The misty mountain drifts into the background... I start The beginning of many Leaving... Beautiful lines.10 for it. Thanks for sharing it with us. Subhas

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Thank you... for the lovely comment

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Gajanan Mishra 18 June 2016

leaving the memory of many beginnings, good one.

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Thank you for your kind words

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