Beggar: Man Or King? Poem by elysabeth faslund

And the Kings image will serve as the beggars bite... Very Nice contemporary 'Ku, young lady....Actually had a wee bot of spare time today...You had just posted this poem as i logged in....Just thought i'd stop by & say hello & enjoya read by a very fine potess(that be you) ...Hope you're enjoying your summer, Elysabeth... ~ ~ ~

The haves and the have nots. A perfect mix of contemporary haiku style and timeless truth. You pen flows with great skill. love, Allie xxxx

Haiku(dos) to you for a concise gem!

Darn good poem. Love it. Zen

This is truly a modern haiku par excellence. You capture one moment of an essential truth and open up the horizon of ages of social inequity. Great!

In three lines you have written a great message. Fantastic!