Treasure Island

Valerie Dohren

(13 January 1947 / Southport)

Before the Twilight Falls


If sleep should steal your soul, my love,
Before the twilight falls,
Then I shall be there by your side
When’er the darkness calls.

I’ll hold your hand and soothe your brow,
Your cheek set next to mine,
To kiss you long and taste your lips
As sweet as vintage wine.

And should such darkness fall on you,
Within its shadowed space
You’ll find my eyes there shining bright
Upon your ashen face.

Know this, my love, I promise that
You’ll never be alone,
My heart will follow as you go
Across that stepping stone.

Our life shall always be as one,
Not ever set apart –
Through all my time, I’ll ever hold
Your mem’ry in my heart.

Submitted: Thursday, August 15, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 16, 2013

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  • Roseann Shawiak (10/10/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    Very beautiful love poem. It's how I feel about my husband, even after 37 years of marriage. Thank you for sharing Val. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (9/16/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    A beautiful love poem with the care and dedication of a true marriage of heart and mind. (Report) Reply

  • Om Chawla (8/29/2013 6:40:00 AM)

    An excellent love poem genuine expression of faith trust and commitment. When I read second and third stanza of your poem I was reminded of your earlier poem 'What say you my heart' where you wrote
    'Sleep like a babe so tranquil
    in the arms of loving care '
    It is sheer delight reading your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (8/27/2013 7:36:00 AM)

    In sickness and in health till death we do part. A beautiful poem
    of love, care and devotion. So delicately written and expressed
    with great emotions. Nicely written (Report) Reply

  • Rod Morris (8/24/2013 7:40:00 PM)

    A moving poem of deepest love one being can have for another. I'm sure this is the way it is meant to be when one knows they have found their perfect match. Beautifully crafted and a pleasure to read. You may enjoy one of mine called Smitten Keep up the writing so as I can enjoy the reading, cheers, Rod. (Report) Reply

  • Meena Mustafa (8/20/2013 3:36:00 PM)

    This is such a lovely poem... shows the depth of love and care. My hats off to you Val :) Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (8/17/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    A very moving write, intense with passion and emotion! True love bides through thick and thin! ! Greatly enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (8/17/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    A very moving write, intense with passion and emotion! True love bides through thick and thin! ! Greatly enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • G.R. Gaus (8/17/2013 10:39:00 PM)

    To be with that one special person at the end and then some, to show that person true love in the final hour and beyond, to walk him through that passage way into the afterlife, never letting go; Simply Beautiful Valerie..... (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/17/2013 12:46:00 PM)

    a beautiful romantic poem our life shall always be as one not ever set apart through all my time I'll ever hold your mem'ry in my heart. so lovely (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (8/17/2013 10:32:00 AM)

    Authentic in tone and enticing in charm, this poem speaks out a poet`s heart wedded to love and its mysterious phases in our life. A good write Valerie. (Report) Reply

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