Before Hurrying On Poem by Daniel Brick

Before Hurrying On

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Along the lake's edge, pale reeds lie broken.
Ducks disturb the surface: they spell
their message with a single letter,
forever vanishing, forever reappearing.

Red-winged blackbirds cluster overhead:
one giant wing glides through deep sky.
Two children patiently fish in Mud Lake.
Then we embrace before hurrying on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 17 August 2014

Some fleeting scenes are made immortal! Enjoyed the simple elegance of this poem!

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Anand Brown 14 May 2014

Excellent little poem. Simple and absorbing.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 May 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.

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