* Before Fire Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* Before Fire

Rating: 2.5


Clicks with fingers - are not an exit - from a trouble...
Your sentry dog will not help to you avoid from fear...
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What remains to the unwinged butterfly before fire...
Or to water-nymph who someone cuts - golden hair...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 23 October 2010

i love your ability to take so few words and yet say so much. Great write.

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Afzal Shauq 07 February 2010

What remains to the unwinged butterfly before fire... Or to water-nymph who someone cuts - golden hair... quite meaningful and interesting...well done 10/10

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Milena Veleva 05 February 2010

One thing remains certain - one awakes in someone’s past

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James Mclain 05 February 2010

with the fingers they aren't produced - lt's? wise once thereof concernd… your dog sleeply.. Any rest in the unwinged in it the butterfly before the roaring fire… OR hand in the nymph her water- where swims? moss it cuts - the hair of the flower... humming it hovers....iip

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~ Jon London ~ 05 February 2010

There's a wonderful calmness within your finely penned lines my friend...such a pleasure to be reading your poetry after such a long time...Beautiful as always

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