Before Both Of Us Can Feel....Part 1 Poem by Bull Hawking
Before Both Of Us Can Feel....Part 1
I should have been afraid
afraid of loosing you
utopia was a topic
but my trop-ics were too few
I should have been afraid
afraid of loosing you
but I never really owned you
never kept you on my pen
you were only ever there
only in my mind
nothing ever happened
but what happened in my mind
If I could have only kept you
kept you as my friend
I wouldn't be like gold ore
gold you never mined
If our troth had only
lived in truth
lol..you are right about the spelling of loosing but I misspell words for effect....it is a vocal clue to lengthen the vowel I am offending. in the end I meant if only our troth had lived in truth....troth....being an antiquated word meaning....loyal or pledged faithfulness. Thanks for your comment.
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4/25/2024 4:16:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Part 2.....is under the title.....if only truth was simple.... Glad you liked it.....you are never boring.