Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,781 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Bedroom Tax The Legacy - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In the aftermath
of your destruction
you leave a legacy

A legacy of poverty and pain
children starving
people dying
lost souls crying

Shame on you


Comments about Bedroom Tax The Legacy by Dave Alan Walker

  • Bronze Star - 2,993 Points Ken E Hall (8/6/2013 8:01:00 PM)

    Insight into reality you seem to have an uncanny way to hit the nail right on the head and a sting in the last line, may be a minstrel with words...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,554 Points Anthony Di''anno (7/28/2013 4:23:00 AM)

    Maybe the shame should be on us for allowing these things to happen. We are the ones who comply after all.
    Good point well said Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,166 Points Hazel Durham (7/27/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    The poor are the forgotten people in ruthless bureaucracy that stoops so low with their treatment of ordinary people!
    Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (7/26/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    Governments exist for the rich to prosper at the expense of the poor. UP the revolution! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/25/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    Taxes are more certain than death resulting in a slow painful death. Worthy write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/25/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    Taxes are more certain than death resulting in a slow painful death. Worthy write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/25/2013 7:07:00 AM)

    very true
    good poem
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 338 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/25/2013 4:17:00 AM)

    A good assessment on the careless (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Babalola Augustine Adeola (7/25/2013 4:06:00 AM)

    Hmmm... Don't just know what to say. But this is a reality (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (7/24/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Very true. I relate it with the population explosion in the third world.which affect the health of a nation. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,882 Points Heather Wilkins (7/24/2013 3:49:00 PM)

    yes so true. I agree shame on you. good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/24/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    how true, a brilliant write sir (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,366 Points Ramesh Rai (7/23/2013 9:22:00 PM)

    great write frnd Dave.it is your excellency you say a lot within your few words.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,509 Points Valerie Dohren (7/23/2013 4:35:00 PM)

    Here here Dave, an appalling situation, and no doubt they are still abusing their expenses system! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013


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