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What do you think this poem is about?

Bed

Slip into cool sheets
under the cover
Two people meet
You and your lover

Touching a must
A kiss, a caress
Building trust
No duress

Fingers do touch
Exploring
Intense, too much?
Eyes Imploring

Radiating glow
Bathed in sweat
Nice and slow
So glad to have met

Breaths short and shallow
Bodies tingling
Minds now mellow
Hearts mingling

Laying sated
Hearts that raced
having mated 
Lovers embraced. 

Lay in the glow
Gone with the flow
Everything slow
To sleep we go. 

Submitted: Monday, May 28, 2012
Edited: Monday, May 28, 2012


Comments about this poem (Bed by Robert Green )

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/8/2012 11:28:00 PM)

    And nothing could be its better definition Sir.Well conceptualized

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  • Angel Teukie Teukie (7/5/2012 5:45:00 PM)

    I read your poem just the way you describe it :)
    Hearts that raced is exactly how I read it. Lovely.

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  • Valerie Dohren (6/12/2012 4:49:00 PM)

    Quite erotic Robert - good one.

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  • Saint Thomas (5/30/2012 4:41:00 PM)

    Great poem and i have just read it at the right time. I will do just what the last line says! Keep writing Bert. :)

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