* * * Because Of Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Because Of

Rating: 4.2


Because of winds,
Because of a rain rest,

Because of a swallow... yet
For that, cannot sits in a nest,

Because, the bridge of rainbow -
Has not disappeared yet as a dream,

I'll sit in the middle of a rainbow,
What to plait by camomiles a crowns.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 20 May 2009

As always Tsira this is stunningly beautiful...Fi 10+++

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LOVEFOOL Aka 20 May 2009

Nice write very psychedelic 10++

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Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2009

Sounds like a comfy spot.

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C. P. Sharma 20 May 2009

Wonderful imagery. Because, the bridge of rainbow - Has not disappeared yet as a dream, CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 May 2009

'I'll sit in the middle of a rainbow, What to plait by camomiles a crowns.' Wonderful short soft poem with rich metaphor. Your work is always lovely. My :) 10 with it.

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Saadat Tahir 30 May 2009

nice imagery vivid and yet a shade sad.. nice stuff cheers

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Costa Anakiev 29 May 2009

Dear Tsira, well done. I painted this picture in my mind and liked it. Konstantin. P.S. I liked you joke about arithmetic. 'It's difficult for me to count 100, so, I'd better eat you...'

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009

Very moving. Your elegant poem deserves much praise. 10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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Antonio Liao 24 May 2009

...because of Tsira.....the meaning of the day is today and the essence of tomorrow is to feel each poem you've made.....its good start to reflect and a nice day to smile with your poem of saying the goodbye of what was yesterday.....i like your poem...thank you and God bless my friend

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Surayya Abbas 24 May 2009

A beautiful poem. Nice to read.

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