Beauty, Love And Heart Breaks Poem by Davy Lungu

Beauty, Love And Heart Breaks

Rating: 5.0


the tale of our great fall
insecurity was the director
fear wrote the script that left my strength in awe
my heart believed what it read and convinced my character
started to live it forgot it was just a role
had a perfect life before i became an actor
i was happy with the love of my life
but i lived in the moment a lot of moments brought a lot of love n bitter strife
hope came before my heart went into torment
infatuation was disguised as a river of love n into it i would dive
such a hypocrite when i judge n m no saint
i have not found love
all things great are from God so its from above
am dying for all things beautiful i hope heaven receives me
may broken hearts forgive me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 15 February 2016

i was happy with the love of my life but i lived in the moment a lot of moments brought a lot of love n bitter strife infatuation was disguised as a river of love.......... allthings great are from God....... thank you for this great poem with so many wonderful ideas of life and a real confession of the truths of life. thank you. dear poet, , , tony

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Adeline Foster 16 November 2013

A well thought out poem and the subject is well expressed. Read mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline

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