Beautiful Sunset Poem by Emilia Young

Beautiful Sunset

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful sunset
Blazing red rolls of clouds
Swatches of indents upon them
As if animated
Floating at ease
And then I spied a gleaming ray peeking through
Slowly descending to sweep over the parkland
Now so still
People walking their dogs
Trodding silently in the glow of the evening
I peered through my glasses
Looking for signs of tomorrow's weather...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prasanna Kumari 30 November 2006

the sunset painted with your words is also beautiful...

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Greg Oosterhouse 23 November 2006

Like the others said, this is a lovely portrait of some very lovely scenery. You must have seen a sunset, which inspired this?

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Melvina Germain 23 November 2006

You painted a beautiful picture here, lovely imagry.---Melvina---

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David Darbyshire 22 November 2006

If the swallows fly high it will be a nice day tomorrow, when the cows lye down whatch out...red sky a night hihihi nice write dave xxx

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