Beautiful Little Stranger Poem by Anoop Lokkur

Beautiful Little Stranger

Rating: 3.2


As I walked down the steps,
my eyes caught your innocence.
The moisture on your lips
inviting to be kissed.

Your firm suple breast
could not make me rest;
And as you walked towards me
all I wanted was us to be alone.

As I see you bid farewell,
I wish to see you again.
But in my mind you shall remain forever
as my beautiful little stranger

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 07 October 2006

Anoop, this a whimsical little poem. It has sincerity and warmth and some beautiful images particularly 'my eyes caught your innocence' - and the last line added depth to the essentially descriptive nature of the piece. Warmly Alison

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Daniel Tyler 07 October 2006

the best of your collection. Beautiful flow and word selection. But in my mind you shall remain forever as my beautiful little stranger Stunning.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 October 2006

Very beautiful Anoop! A little stranger can do lot of changes in your life? Take care.

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R H 07 October 2006

I like the images you have created here - great ending to this too. Justine

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Your Sword Vs My Pen 07 October 2006

Ive felt this way many times, you've expressed my feelings well! Great poem

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