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Beautiful Chaos

I feel your pain all over me
Quivering at the fingertips
You touch me with something incredibly awesome
Maybe I'm restless
Maybe it's just a thought slowly passing by me
Great intentions can be inspiring
Nobody knows about us
For traces of the unknown are never found
Broken mysteries occur upon my heart's thriving melody
I'm dying of a lost love
To be alive in this state of passion shall evoke me furthermore
The darkness in which I dwell shall soon turn to insight
Behold the deepest part of me
That seems innately discombobulated
My mind frightened by such words
A beautiful chaos indeed
Tangled up in white and gold fantasies
Oh take me to the chapel dear lord
My truelove is waiting for his one and only...me
I cannot be late
The time is near.

Submitted: Monday, November 18, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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  • * Sunprincess * (1/14/2014 7:31:00 PM)

    ...even my mind Is frightened by this word you are using..discombobulated...
    I must research it.....i like the last stanza it is beautiful...

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  • Kevin Patrick (12/15/2013 7:47:00 PM)

    Man this just spirals into a world of lyricism, so much could be said, philosophical in places to especially the duality converging within our inherit natures struggle for being noble and unleashing the monster inside of us

    The darkness in which I dwell shall soon turn to insight

    THAT's the heart of this for me, the erotique sensuality of our self destructive impulses and the beautiful chaos unleashed. The final lines are both riveting and terrifying in what it means for the narrator and what world they wish to enter. Great stuff

  • Elena Sandu (11/19/2013 8:17:00 PM)

    Nobody knows about us
    For traces of the unknown are never found
    Broken mysteries occur upon my heart's thriving melody
    I'm dying of a lost love
    Simply beautiful! Thank you for share!

  • Xena Terrell (11/19/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    Lovely..........

  • Xena Terrell (11/19/2013 12:15:00 PM)

    Lovely..........

  • Sekharan Pookkat (11/19/2013 11:07:00 AM)

    My truelove is waiting for his one and only...me
    I cannot be late
    The time is near.
    good write
    I like the lines very much

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