Beautiful Bug Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Beautiful Bug

Rating: 5.0


Black, red and white
bug had the colours in sight
natural dark unmixed black
partly covering the body
no chemical can give that red
another part on that bug
the white antennae like pearl
the crown glowing in full
no beauty can match
this absolute colour mix

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

Nice composition

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Eyan Desir 01 July 2009

Nice written 10sss.........

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Shekhar Joshi 02 July 2009

amazingly vivid description of the bug........ beautiful work......... ;)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

Black, red and white bug had the colours in sight natural dark unmixed black partly covering the body no chemical can give that red another part on that bug............................bugs are so uniquae........... beautiful write....10 i loved it

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~ Jon London ~ 15 September 2009

The lady bird...has it's very own unique dresscode....Beautiful tender bugs...that remind us that summers on its way...lovely descriptive write Mubeen...keep'm coming 10

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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

iam really are so shocked yet delighted, you have great amagination....really fun to read your all poem! !

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Quin Faas 11 October 2009

oh the colors of a bug.... you dressed this one nicely

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Munia Khan 09 October 2009

How beautiful even a bug can be with the wonder of a pen......Never realized until I go through to it...

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Eyan Desir 08 October 2009

I have never seen a beautiful bug Well good write and sorry I hate bugs..lol

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 September 2009

nature ha s dressed them so well....amazing description...10

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