Beautiful Beyond Doubt Poem by David Taylor

Beautiful Beyond Doubt

Rating: 4.9


A shimmering of your hair
As I glance in awe
A quiver of your lips
As I swallow in anticipation
A flashing of your eyes
As I stand near not far
A movement of your hips
As I watch you walk
A gesture of your hand
As I lower my lips
A laughter in the air
As I make another quip
A sigh from deep within
As I tell you my intent
A gasp from tender breast
As I look so deep within
A tremble in your legs
As I make you remember
And you have absolutely no doubt
Beauty is in the making
Through each breath
Each of us are together taking.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 18 April 2007

Lovely poem David, full of anticipation, a 10 for this, Lynda x

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Fay Slimm 23 September 2008

A great love poem if ever I read one. Well penned.

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Michelle Tiddy 23 April 2007

Lovely poem again David! ! : -)

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Michael Fischer 19 April 2007

Great use of vivid detail and description. Your captured the scene perfectly, painting a beautiful picture of a beautiful woman. That's what makes it memorable for me! Top marks! -Michael

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Marci Made 18 April 2007

Tastefully sensual, beautifully written of what appears to be a passionate love. Hot! A fortunate wife have you~~~~~~~~~~mm.

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Ernestine Northover 18 April 2007

Undoubtedly a excellent write. I like your style. Great read. Love Ernestine XXX

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