Beauties Nucleus, Gloria Poem by Ken e Hall

Beauties Nucleus, Gloria

Rating: 4.8


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My darling,


If I was a painter
a master of repute,
A genius of deft strokes
to sketch the charcoal base.
One thousand years of learning
need I,
indeed,
to reproduce the beauty
that dwells within your soul,
and reflects upon your face.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 29 August 2008

That is such a beautiful tribute to your wife. Well done.

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Amie-Lee ...... 15 April 2008

This is a really good poem, great description of your wife's beauty

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James B. Earley 29 April 2008

You are an artist my friend, for you have painted an exciting image of passionate devotion!

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Subroto Chatterjee 18 April 2009

Ah yes, And Glory be her name! A beautiful tribute to one's life partner. What more could she ask for? Cheers. Subroto

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Muhammad Ali 31 March 2009

Super tribute my friend More than beautiful poem expressing deep transparent love 10

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Jessica Jemima 15 January 2009

How lovely! Keep it up :)

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Fay Slimm 16 December 2008

A beautiful tribute to a beautiful love Ken. - - wishing you all the happiness your verse sings about - forever....... and warm wishes to your Gloria who inspired it.... from Fay.

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

So close, yet so far away. The length is perfect. The form and structure are fine. There is only one thing it needs so much to make it one of mine. The only thing to make it sound like music to our ears. Rhythm and rhyme the only things to which the mind adheres. GW62

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