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My darling,
If I was a painter
a master of repute,
A genius of deft strokes
to sketch the charcoal base.
One thousand years of learning
need I,
indeed,
to reproduce the beauty
that dwells within your soul,
and reflects upon your face.
This is a really good poem, great description of your wife's beauty
You are an artist my friend, for you have painted an exciting image of passionate devotion!
Ah yes, And Glory be her name! A beautiful tribute to one's life partner. What more could she ask for? Cheers. Subroto
Super tribute my friend More than beautiful poem expressing deep transparent love 10
A beautiful tribute to a beautiful love Ken. - - wishing you all the happiness your verse sings about - forever....... and warm wishes to your Gloria who inspired it.... from Fay.
So close, yet so far away. The length is perfect. The form and structure are fine. There is only one thing it needs so much to make it one of mine. The only thing to make it sound like music to our ears. Rhythm and rhyme the only things to which the mind adheres. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is such a beautiful tribute to your wife. Well done.