<≪≪≪beauideal≫≫≫≫ Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

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Rating: 2.9


I.
Oh, beauideal! unveil thine plaid,
Where my heart and love I laid.
Thine parts shone, lo! 'bejewelled belle'
And thy ornated feet had my heart's bell.
II.
Thy lips like cymbals, rang loves' thyme,
Like a sonnet had its perfect rhyme.
'Thou wast a queen with a pearl bespangled parsol'
Thirsted were the drops of my drizzle of soul.
III.
Wandered were they the most-
To glide throu' thy plums in a lust.
Hastn't yet thou heard the music of rain-dance
When I wait 'ere with my heart for thy glance?

Friday, December 2, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
iruuka Blackheart 19 December 2011

such a beautiful poem there are many poems of love but there are only a couple that i can read over and over...and i just read this about 8 times

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Jacqui Broad 02 December 2011

Another beautiful poem! I see lately you use old English. Like the old masters Shakespeare etc. You're great, though.

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Crimson Love 02 December 2011

This is truly magnificent, you always seem to come up with the most brilliant works, phenomenal poem my friend.

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Dave Walker 09 December 2011

Wonderful wording, a great poem.

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Binish Cd 12 December 2011

dear friend, u have a great command over language. excellent work.

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Anita Sehgal 27 December 2012

beautifully woven with choice words..!

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June30 Tara 26 December 2011

wow...beau ideal... Read this one over and over again..now want to read all of your poems

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Dylan Dowrick 25 December 2011

are you sure you didnt come out of a Shakespearean novel? very good fellow colleague

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Dylan Dowrick 25 December 2011

are you sure you didnt come out of a Shakespearean novel? very good fellow colleague

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Dylan Dowrick 25 December 2011

are you sure you didnt come out of a Shakespearean novel? very good fellow colleague

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