Bears Can Show Love, Too! Poem by * Sunprincess *

Bears Can Show Love, Too!



oh cried little crow, save me, save me, save me
I am drowning in this pool, I can't swim
in the deep water, crow struggled to be free

at the zoo anything can happen, be alert be aware
a big friendly bear says crow, I will save you
in the afternoon sun, bear lounged without a care

help me, help me, cried crow, bear what's taking you so long
bobbing up and down in the water, trying to flap his wings,
will I make it out of here alive, will I ever sing another song?

lazily bear sauntered over, and pulled crow from his pool
crow laid there for a moment, to catch his breath
then stood up, and said bear you're my hero, you're so cool

bear smiled, took a bow, and sauntered over to eat his lunch
and crow, he was flapping the water from his wings
bear I am forever in your debt, thanks alot, thanks a bunch!

Sunday, August 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: animals
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Katona 24 August 2014

Wonderful poem Rachel. I saw this video on youtube.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 26 September 2014

A timely help it saved the crow. Beautiful story and told in such good poem and likes.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 September 2014

Nice story beautifully narrated. All is well that ends well. Thank you.

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Elena Sandu 17 September 2014

What a beautiful story, loved the way you told it! Yes bears can be loving and very peaceful if they are not hungry and don't feel threatened. Thank you for share, I think it was a greatest moment for the kids who were there, to learn from a bear to be compasionate does't happen often. Thank you for share, loved both the read and the video!

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Milton Styner Jr 11 September 2014

great poem i truly enjoy it keep write

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 August 2014

Comments of Stephen Kotana let me knew that it is a description of a video but youtube is banned in Pakistan. But your poem is also a lovely video.

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