Beach Poem by shiny shine

even though its short, you can tell the beauty of the beach... love it 10++

We all are in search of our beaches in desrts. CP

This is my introduction to your work and it makes me want to go and read the others now! This concise little piece is nicely expressive and in one sense leaves the reader wanting more. But I feel that you are right to make it as short as you have, it adds to its effectiveness rather than detracting from it.

'as i look out at the restless waves my thoughts unwind like restless days' very very good line. short and sweet does it sometimes. great piece

Beautifully descriptive poem, brings back vivid memories quite well.

I love it. Couldn't of written anything better! !

Surrounding is spelt wrong

I like the way you wrote the poem.One thought continuously perceiving the other thoughts aroused.Comparing the continuous flow of thoughts with continuous fluctuations and variations of sea water.Nice poem

good write well expresss....

Captures the shoreline well.