Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,062 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Be Still My Love


I saw your tears in dawn’s soft light
As close beside you then I lay
Within my arms I held you tight
To ease you through another day

The smile that once lit up your face
Became a distant memory -
Oh you I never could replace
You’ll always be the world to me

Another day, another time
The sun will shine forever long
Across celestial realms sublime
When we will sing a sweeter song

Be still, my love, don’t weep, don’t weep
It’s time, my love, to sleep, to sleep

Submitted: Tuesday, October 15, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013

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I wrote this poem around the time of my husband's death and in the turmoil, forgot to post it.

Comments about this poem (Be Still My Love by Valerie Dohren )

  • Gold Star - 6,676 Points Amitava Sur (4/14/2014 8:13:00 AM)

    It is so endearing for the beloved that words cannot explain, ...... very nice (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,935 Points Ken E Hall (11/10/2013 4:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful title as the tide of feelings expressed at a heart wreching time so sad...life goes on...
    'we'll meet again' fills the poem...regards (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (11/1/2013 3:20:00 PM)

    Never ever i felt so touched after reading somebody 's poem... these poems are realyy very beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (10/28/2013 2:47:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem expressing romance filling the moment! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Robert Green (10/24/2013 3:19:00 PM)

    So very heartfelt................................ (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,851 Points Patricia Grantham (10/23/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    Glad to have you back Valerie. Your poem echoes and resonates deep
    and emotional words of love and expressions of strength. To so
    lovingly bring this to the center of your poems is very encouraging.
    You are a poetess of the greatest caliber. Very heartfelt and touching. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Kavya . (10/23/2013 2:26:00 AM)

    magical words of love put together into a wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,053 Points Godfrey Morris (10/22/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful poem, I especially like the last two lines. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (10/21/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    Your beautiful words always playing a heartfelt emotion in everybody..loved it_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 4:04:00 AM)

    True love soothes the broken heart of loved one...it cares to inspire! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/21/2013 2:56:00 AM)

    Oh no dis is such a sadening dirge like poem, must hav been hard writin it, how d ink must hav combined with tears here. But its a commendable peaceful drifting poem to a dying belovd! Pls do chk out my latest on d statue of lib... Warm regards. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 212 Points Dee Corpolongo (10/20/2013 5:23:00 AM)

    This is so beautiful, Val, a sonnet written with such love....and heart filled sadness
    that leaves you feeling so alone.... I pray this gets bearable for you, and soon you
    realize it is only a temporary separation..... and.this is a beautiful dedication.{{{hugs}}} (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,554 Points Dinesh Nair (10/20/2013 2:51:00 AM)

    It is a poem that speaks a lot about your great love that never shrinks Valerie. It is nice you have started visiting the P.H and it is time for you to submit more periodically.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points John Brown (10/19/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    I'm glad you posted it Val, it's lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Richard Price (10/19/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    Impressive poem Val. Sorry for your loss. Rhythm change unintentional! Richard Anders. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (10/19/2013 5:00:00 AM)

    Lovely poem Val, it echo's my poem To My Sweet Love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Lucifera Santez (10/18/2013 4:47:00 AM)

    its very beautiful,
    achingly so,
    its an expression of love, longing and pain interwoven in an excellent piece.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 815 Points Om Chawla (10/17/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    A very touching and beautiful write. Memory stays and hope transcends all barriers.
    'Across celestial realms sublime
    when we will sing a sweeter song'.
    thanks for sharing very personal feelings. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,668 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/16/2013 9:33:00 PM)

    Oh you I never could replace
    You’ll always be the world to me
    Memory will stay. This poem says all. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points Danny Draper (10/15/2013 11:13:00 PM)

    A beautiful and loving poem, very private and very kind of you to share. (Report) Reply

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