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Be My Sky

I don't want you to be my star,
because you won't be up there always.
I don't want you to be my Sun,
because you won't shine always.

Be my Sky.
Then when i look up,
i see always.

Love me with your soul.
Love in all season.
Love me without reason.
Give me wings and make me whole.
Let me fly and be my sky.

Submitted: Friday, October 26, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Poet's Notes about The Poem

this poem is for those whose love is tamed

Comments about this poem (Be My Sky by enebeli ifyprada )

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/29/2012 6:33:00 PM)

    the interplay of sun -sky-love-sun is nicely brought about/

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