Be Kind Be Sweet Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Be Kind Be Sweet

Rating: 4.8


Let his eyes net,
net her,
his sweet sweat,
sweat her,
without threat
take her
into a place of light.

With golden light
face her,
in silver light
lace her,
never, never trace her
into the darkness
of the grave
she craves.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 06 October 2013

a good poem Sally. a great play on words.

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Sally P. P. 07 June 2019

Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. Sally

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Dave Walker 14 April 2012

A great poem, like it.

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Sally P. P. 07 June 2019

Nice to hear from you, Dave. Thanks. Sally.

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

[Excellent depiction] An amazing poem! ! !

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Sally P. P. 03 April 2020

Thankyou, Vipins, much appreciated remark x

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Unwritten Soul 07 July 2011

This kind sound sweet when you say be kind mean you so sweet..like it it really a simple but triple smiles :) _Unwritten Soul

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Lay P. P. 04 April 2020

Thanks for you happy comment x

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Jess Silva 12 March 2011

Really glad I found this poem, you are a talented writer that's for sure.

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Sally P. P. 16 April 2020

A lovely comment, Jess. Thankyou.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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