Barter Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Barter

Rating: 4.8


Give me a loving look for once,
I'll ask the full moon to spread
On your face her soft ambiance,
Just if you take this as a trade.

Come and enter into the fold
Of my long outstretched hands,
You'll feel the warmth I hold,
Your body so quietly demands.

No need to tell me you love me,
For me it's just enough if you be
With me, for I know when you agree,
You cannot just go without loving me.

Give me your little doll,
And be just a dolly yourself,
I'll be doing nothing else at all,
But playing with you and myself.


Dhaka
09 November 2013

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Vitter 23 December 2013

Nice concept. I get it. I've been reading a lot of poetry on this sit, and this one is professional grade!

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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2018

'and this one is professional grade' - thanks, @Kay Vitter, for this high appraisal. Much inspired by your comment. I've just read your poem - 'The Struggle' and left my comment there.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 November 2013

@Pradip Chattopadhyay, Thanks a lot, Pradip!

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Katerina Richmond 10 November 2013

This is awesome! What do you mean by playing with her and yourself though? :) I think I get it, but I'm not certain. Either way I like it!

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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2018

'I'll be doing nothing else at all, But playing with you and myself' - this is left open to the readers' imagination! Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. I am inspired by your appreciation of the poem, @Katrina Richmond.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 November 2013

a lovely poem indeed!

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