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Barely In Love

Last night we made love desperately
The passion darkened like a stormy cloud
The beast within was a trying sin!
As emotions ignited
Wanton winds did sing
The aching in my heart grew heavy
At that moment
I was longing for my conscience to save me
I uttered a sigh of sweet guilt
The warmth of our bodies felt like a burning flame
Innocence no longer lingered here
Shadows rose as tender hearts collided!
What became of the scarlet rose enchanted?
Dear John
You knew the truth that night!
You knew I wasn't her
And that she never existed.

Submitted: Sunday, February 09, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014

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  • Susan Lacovara (2/21/2014 7:21:00 PM)

    When the mask of passion is discarded, love, sometimes dies, a stranger. Well penned and unique, in it's twist of fate. Expressed a side of love we sadly Don't wish to see...but Do recognize. PEACE

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  • Aqua Flower (2/15/2014 6:25:00 AM)

    Great poem of passion, emotion and torment! Fantasy or Reality? As you read it you can feel the conflict.....the torture and the agony of it all!

  • Kevin Patrick (2/13/2014 4:56:00 PM)

    Never be in love with a disguise, it will just bring tears to your eyes. At first I thought this was going to be a typical deep in the throws of passions, but those last two stanzas turn something hot and heavy with the cold consequences of what happens. You make me celibate

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