Balloon Seller Poem by hema ravi

Balloon Seller

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(CASCADE)

Pleasant is the moment
As he pedals down the street
A string of vibrant balloons on his bicycle.

Red, yellow, green and multi coloured!
The familiar sound of his bicycle bell
Pleasant is the moment.

Jubilant children running out from houses
Grasping coins in their tiny hands
As he pedals down the street.

He hums a pleasant tune
gently, as the breeze blows
A string of vibrant balloons on his bicycle.


Hema Ravi,17.08.09

(Cascade, a form created by Udit Bhatia is all about receptiveness, but in a smooth cascading way like a waterfall. The poem does not have any rhyme scheme; therefore, the layout is simple.
Say the first verse has three lines. Line one of verse one becomes the last line of verse two. To follow in suit, the second line of verse one becomes the last line of verse three. The third line of verse one now becomes the last line of verse four, the last stanza of the poem.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

cascading pleasure and joyful bliss when children are there to enjoy.... balloon seller concept is just like catalyst...kids love balloons unlike most of us who hate balloons for a manliness's sake...good write indeed.

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Saadat Tahir 17 August 2009

very nice cascade there.... i dint know about it.....havent done too much poetry... thanx for the info and an absolutely beautiful poem....imersed in nostalgia nad so very middle class like myself cheers and...hey u new in town....here get yer .....ten

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