Balancing Poem by Bharati Nayak
Balancing
I have come
Yet I have not come
I may not come any day
When I have come
I have filled you
With love
If I have not come
I have left
Some spaces vacant
With some promises
To fill
The promises
May not be filled
Any day
As I may not come
As my fate
Hangs in balance
Between love and void.
A critic how can fill his truth on this poem the filling of love is done first and the mean time you left some vacant space for your promises. If your space which you left have something in womb then the love which you filled is beautiful. still we have hopes on promises. Otherwise the other side who waiting for this will end his gifted days in unconscious mood nice to read
Loved your comment.Yes promises are synonymous with hopes.Without any promise, there can't be any hope.There comes the role of fate.Thanks for your comments
As I may not come As my fate Hangs in balance Between love and void...... so nicely envisioned. A poem of stunning composition I like most. Thanks for sharing. ..... 10
Oh! What a wonderful thought? As my fate hang in balance.....void.I love this.
True love! Love and dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
In-decisive hearts outcry for the love is beautifully penned in poetic lines dear mam!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 9:26:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
the tricky business of balancing between love and void is written as a beautiful poem..Nice to read..
It is wonderful to read your comments.Yes balancing is a tricky business.There are many situations in life when you oscillate between yes and no