Balanced Polarity Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Hi Persian Nightingale - This is an elegant poem with good structure and content. I like the unusual rhyming pattern x a a b then a x a x b. This rhyme gives it excellent rhythm and flow. Waht are the qualities you are seeking to balance your polarity? V 2 In sound a move from Dissonance (lovely word) to Harmony and in sight to Verity and Clarity. V 2 A desire for a sincere sharing of Peace and Prosperity. If we achieve all these things it would result in 'Time for the demise of uncertainty'. Thanks for sharing I am sure others will find other gems in this very profound poem. I score it MAX (Ten) . Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

Is fine poem, Nightingale Sometimes polarity - as self-defence for the lonely... Which fantastically reaches to harmony even at time of uncertainty..10... Best wishes, Tsira

I love the first line of your second stanza. 'Sincerity' is rare in the world of today. I agree with John. This is a profound write.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

where u can c less of text and more of meaning u can c the nickname Nightingale

this is full of wisdom, delicate words used passionately....what a poem it is...wow is the word....now I shall also look for nightingale wherever the words are few and the meaning is deep.....

liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again

liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again

liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again

liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again

liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again