Treasure Island

Persian Nightingale


Balanced Polarity


From dissonance to Harmony
Seeking the eternal Verity
The Clarity
Was back in my eyes

Share with me your Sincerity
Let me have
Peace and Prosperity
Time for
Uncertainty's demise

2010/1/17

Submitted: Sunday, January 17, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, February 09, 2010

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:55:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:54:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:54:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:53:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:53:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:53:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:52:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 9:52:00 AM)

    liked these lines:

    From dissonance to Harmony
    Seeking the eternal Verity

    it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ?
    thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again (Report) Reply

  • Nikunj Sharma (1/29/2010 6:12:00 AM)

    this is full of wisdom, delicate words used passionately....what a poem it is...wow is the word....now I shall also look for nightingale wherever the words are few and the meaning is deep..... (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (1/22/2010 3:42:00 AM)

    I love the first line of your second stanza.
    'Sincerity' is rare in the world of today.
    I agree with John. This is a profound
    write.10/10.

    Always your friend,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Tsira Goge (1/22/2010 2:18:00 AM)

    Is fine poem, Nightingale
    Sometimes polarity - as self-defence for the lonely...
    Which fantastically reaches to harmony even at time of uncertainty..10...
    Best wishes,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (1/19/2010 10:27:00 AM)

    Hi Persian Nightingale - This is an elegant poem with good structure and content. I like the unusual rhyming pattern x a a b then a x a x b. This rhyme gives it excellent rhythm and flow. Waht are the qualities you are seeking to balance your polarity? V 2 In sound a move from Dissonance (lovely word) to Harmony and in sight to Verity and Clarity. V 2 A desire for a sincere sharing of Peace and Prosperity. If we achieve all these things it would result in 'Time for the demise of uncertainty'. Thanks for sharing I am sure others will find other gems in this very profound poem. I score it MAX (Ten) . Yours in Poetry - JOHN. (Report) Reply

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