Bad Situation Poem by sheemo ...

Bad Situation



I have a bad situation
i dont know what to do
i dont know how to act
im in bad situation

it makes me feel so sad
it makes me feel cry
it makes me feel so happy
i dont know really what i feel

im in bad situation
i dont know what to say
i dont know how to be


I have a bad situation
im in bad situation
that i cant answer you now

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 25 August 2011

This piece I take was written at the height of such emotions. On the point of the 'Bad Situation' i'll say you have done well delivering on that theme. I love the continous use of 'bad situation' in a way it emphasizes the situation as well as offer a sort of subliminal healing-since we suppose that time does heal- having said that, the repeated use buys you time to heal. Excellent poem. Really enjoyed.10/10

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