STANLEY PACION

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Bad Girl - Poem by STANLEY PACION

Her disease, it said,
'Dark around and within,
But outside, far outside, it's all light.'

It said,
'I'm a beggar,
My richness, my excitement, my genital,
All that shines outside,
I am empty.'


Comments about Bad Girl by STANLEY PACION

  • Silver Star - 3,579 Points Wahab Abdul (1/17/2013 12:10:00 PM)

    good one....thoughtful, i like it (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points Unwritten Soul (1/17/2013 9:09:00 AM)

    Like a bulb, without wires...we can be dark in the dark, light when there is light...the transparent bulb does nothing but followed as it received from what have surround, if all wires connected (the self completing self) with the power on we may bright maybe not as bright as the sun outside but we could compete to be bright as our own, and brighter when it is in the dark...a bad girl, bad boy....when they can connect the wires of real life and ON the mind, they can be a light within from their heart..just dont deny it_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 82 Points Jahan Zeb (1/17/2013 7:25:00 AM)

    I don't know I am allowed to comment or not but I am commenting. This poem has got the quality of poetry for it is short but not simple. It carries some hidden meaning inside for it has come out from the brain of a learned person. Well written. Kept me thinking (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 4, 2014


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