Backstabber Poem by Holly Smith

Backstabber

Rating: 5.0


I just want to hate you,
I just want to scream,
or maybe i could just wake up,
and this could all be a dream.

I want this to be over,
why's it happening to me?
you're not who i thought you were,
you're not who i see.

Whenever i'm near you,
I can't help but think
Why did you do this?
You made my heart sink

Yet i cannot leave you,
Hate being on my own,
but the backstabbers showed me,
i'm truly alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vikky Lai 29 September 2009

Another great and effective poem. And i think i can tell erm...yeah; -) xx

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Neil Singleton 28 July 2009

wow a very intresing of rhythm in your free will i love it hunny..10++ xxx

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Irene Clark-hogg 25 July 2009

You have a nice, crisp sense of rhythm which you have used well in this poem. Very enjoyable. Irene

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Reece Lyle 22 July 2009

lol im guessing this about... never mind i love it holly :) keep it up x

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