Tom Allport

Rookie - 0 Points (15/3/1949 / Liverpool)

Babe - Poem by Tom Allport

Babe hold my hand
And understand
How close can we be
Before we see
The strand- which
Pulls and parts
Our hearts
The line so fine
Yours and mine
Loves divine
Through infinite time
Everlasting never parting
Always reaching- reaching
Babe hold my hand
Forever


Comments about Babe by Tom Allport

  • Freshman - 879 Points Leslie Philibert (6/6/2014 10:52:00 AM)

    Good job, a clear voice (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 127 Points Kirti Sharma (6/6/2014 9:58:00 AM)

    this is such a beautiful poem for love..
    i like it! :)
    keep writing such art Tom! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,684 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/6/2014 1:28:00 AM)

    liked it...... far we can go..with hand in hand......till sun can shine............... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (6/6/2013 4:48:00 AM)

    The expression of an inseparable love :) kinda like may death do us part. nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (6/6/2012 9:15:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful poem, everlasting Divine love just hold on to my hand and it is. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,625 Points Neela Nath (6/6/2012 1:30:00 PM)

    The slight touch of alliteration, the internally rhymed words work nicely..10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 233 Points Manonton Dalan (6/6/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    i always keep my hands clean
    just in case somebody wants
    to hold it. nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,679 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (6/6/2012 1:50:00 AM)

    Spontaneous flow of wishing togetherness. well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 23, 2012



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