B: Around The End Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

B: Around The End

Rating: 5.0


Let's pretend it's not
nearly all over,
love like we've loved before.
Love will not then
be all over.
Love will be
like love was before.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 July 2013

Interesting write and carries a tinge of sadness and longing. The words are strong, for one who knows how it is to love and to see it slowly leave, and the pretense as I see it, is the option more acceptable than truth. Because truth hurts too much.

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Danny Draper 16 August 2012

Oh to wish for the impossible, but to know what is ideal and want it back.

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Douglas Scotney

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Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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