(b) 17 (Pain/Longing) Tranquil As The Sea Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(b) 17 (Pain/Longing) Tranquil As The Sea
Tranquil
As the sea
Thats how I feel
Can you forget about me?
It was not meant to be
The waters were muddy
I couldnt see
Floating algae or debris
Leaving you here
All that you were
All that you were not
All that was a blur
All that was hot
All what could have been
All that you screened
All that you gave
All that I craved
All that you did not
All that meant a lot
The hurricane has passed away
And now
Tranquil
As the sea
Thats how I feel
a beautiful poem... it seems to wrk on two levels- exploring the inscape of the poet's mind (perhaps) n external (the nature) ... its a nice write T.O...i wudnt just want to take it in a literal sense... love... asma...
TRANQUIL....NICE TRANQUIL, THAT IS NOW THAT WE HAVE ALREADY DISCUSSED THE OCEAN FROM YESTERDAY...LOL! VERY NICE WORK, HERE, T.O. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
The furry of rivers flow to meet the ocean......Excellent rite T.O.
agreed. Ocean can afford the tranquility. River has no choice. Nice flow and natural truth. Good one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 4:03:04 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Love the pace of this poem, glad i found a new poem by YOU! Preets