Awesome Trouble Poem by Doris Cornago

Awesome Trouble



What pleases you
is what you get
No one can make you do
against your will
Forget me in a moment?
You will if you want
You will if you can...

Alternating pleased
and displeased we play
a game of catch me
and leave me now
causing me to wonder
if the reward is at all
worth the awesome trouble...

Some days are good
Some days are better
When you make time
bend against your will
there is enough to squander
on us - so much laughter
As we clash asunder!

Longing to be with you
is longing to be with me
because in you is where
I see myself most clearly
So I think loving you is
loving myself, too,
which pleases both of us.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem talks about mutuality in being in love. How can one bear putting so much time in a relationship when one is just being taken for granted by another person? Analyzing the give and take in a relationship should lead to the illuminating answer, and a crucial decision.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 27 December 2013

Hi Marvin: I am so glad you understood what the poem is all about. You inspire me to write more. Let me look at your poems, too.

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Marvin Brato 27 December 2013

Awesome poem most can relate!

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