Treasure Island

Abdul Wahab


>> ''Aweeeeee! '' an incredible poem


I could not shout out my words
Cooked by the flooding flickers of emotions
At the lower part of my belly
Nor could I sing my tangled joys and sorrows

Yet I am desperate to become a poet
And wish to write some wordless poetry
As my heart is full of indelible ink
And in my mind I have an incredible brush
To paint rainbows on the cloud of my dreams

People gather around me
To witness a wonder
And they passionately wait
As I dive into my deep thought
To conjure a miraculous poem

Tick tock, tick tock time trickles by
But I could not come up with anything
People get tired of my contortions
And stand up to bid me goodbye
Instinctively I react
And shout out my magical poem
‘'Aweeeeeeeeeee!

Submitted: Saturday, August 10, 2013
Edited: Sunday, July 06, 2014

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  • Shania K. Younce (3/16/2014 4:33:00 PM)

    Wow! ! ! This poem is good. Sometimes I to get the words stuck in my head instead of on paper. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (3/16/2014 2:31:00 PM)

    .its a joyous and cute compilation, unexpected from an immature poet, u must b a mature one.....lovely write.. (Report) Reply

  • Brian Johnston (3/14/2014 2:34:00 AM)

    And to your 'Aweeeeee! ' let me add an exuberant 'Yippie Kai Yi Yea! ' for in addition to my being an ex-physicist, and an aspiring poet like yourself, I am also a 'born and bred' ex-Oklahoma Cowboy and have permission from the Oklahoma 'Cowboy Hall of Fame' to use these 4 words at any time without having to pay royalties. : -) Hey, I have actually rounded up cattle riding on the back of a horse and still have blister scars on my bottom to prove it!

    Still it seems that education in Oklahoma is lacking (and you don't even have to look at their religious leaders or politicians to see this) ! I am reminded of the old joke that 'the British use 20 utensils to eat their food, Africans use 10 (or 5 if they are Moslem) , Americans use 3 utensils, and the Chinese use 2 utensils, which proves that the Chinese are the smartest people in the world!

    You, my friend, are obviously a genius by these standards! What takes me 4 words, you accomplish in 1 word. Great write! Write on Dear Poet! (Where does this stuff we do come from I wonder?) (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (11/24/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    Good poem, i enjoyed reading it


    Chris Lebourn2 minutes ago
    Great! Don't lose your passion for writing! (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (8/12/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    As my heart is full of indelible ink
    And in my mind I have an incredible brush
    To paint rainbows on the cloud of my dreams

    nice lines! ! ! (Report) Reply

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