Awareness Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Awareness

Rating: 4.7


Black and blue,
The sky swells with indignation,
heavy clouds distended with groom
Which pulsate the involuntary
Contractions of the universe!

Behind the curtain,
A central mussel is saturated
With condensations of perfidy
That leave behind membranes
Of consciousness and reality
Forcing them wide-open
At the threshold of awareness...

The heavens groan
with the burst of dams,
Safeguarding the waters
Of human frailty,
When the ventricles of curiosity
Have returned
From the stream of life...

An evaporation of the reservoirs
Of suffering and pain
Carrying the breath
Of immortality
In a different constitution
Than first vitality...

A descending down pour
of human expression
With a transformation
Of nature as a unique part
Of the immense universe! ...

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

Awareness should be the universal objective and i hope posterity reckons ur lines here when the questions arises to hit their morales with many entendres.I hope everyone of us achieve this viscosity of awareness for a better life to come in a better world

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Hans Vr 17 September 2012

Tangible awareness swirled in a magnificent verses A perfect storm Excellent poetry

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 September 2012

Wow a splendid analogy there u draw btw d downpour n d human condition. Bravo 4 dis intrigue

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 11 September 2012

You have that great universal thinking. Beautiful soul.

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Suelynn Walters 09 September 2012

I love it! Great Job Here!

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Wow, a dramatic and thought provoking write. Enjoyed the read.

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