Autumn Poem by Catrina Heart

Autumn

Rating: 4.3


O sweet autumn leaves
Making the forest expressive
WE play along the jungle of life
In hues unfurl the tales of ours

Red, Orange, Yellow, Brown
Love and sorrow, bright as the sun
Gloom escapes from dusk to dawn
Giving spirit to the fallen vegetation

O sweet autumn leaves
Holding, falling, and lying to blanket earth
Each color speaks about our picture perfect
Living lively on cycles in this world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moonbee Canady 24 November 2009

So Lovely, Is This Poem and So Much of A Realism, I Could Almost Smell The Pungent Wild Scent of The Woods... I Love Nature... and The Colors and Autumn could be viewed as symbolistic of Humanity... Good Write... MoonBee

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

Oh sorry about the debate.... Well this piece was very sweet Lady Cartina you should try to publish these poems of yours.... you crawl before you walk you start small and you bulid your self up... Publish your work ok...

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Carol Gall 24 November 2009

hues unfurl lovely catrina your words are a delight 10

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C. P. Sharma 25 November 2009

Your colorful autumn to me reminds The fragrant spring is not far behind. CP

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Ency Bearis 25 November 2009

well illustrated scenery.....colorful....10

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 24 September 2017

Autumn is nicely presented in your poem.

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Rafique Farooqi 31 January 2010

you have scaped beautiful picture of autmn, falling leafs and sunsets of autmn with variety of colours is unfolding natuar's dignified styles of beauty.

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Walterrean Salley 26 December 2009

Love the autum for many reasons. And its leaves are so expressive in their varied hues. A poem well written. 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 December 2009

Each color speaks about our picture perfect Living lively on cycles in this world good mark 10 shan

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Gillena Cox 06 December 2009

lovely sentiments to the season; colours vividly expressed,

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