Treasure Island

sathya narayana

(12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

AUCTION


New clearance sale! ! !
Satan brokered the deal
A salvo from nuclear arsenal
Knocked down bid final
Mr. Hades clinched all
Body wrappers are buried
Spirits are…… under dispatch

Submitted: Monday, December 29, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, April 01, 2009

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  • Catrina Heart (2/12/2009 12:34:00 AM)

    A unique theme and presentation..Auctioned, clearance sale written so fine with great rhymes...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (1/14/2009 12:51:00 PM)

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    Alas! We are AUCTIONED!
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  • Eddie Roa (1/13/2009 5:10:00 AM)

    You have lightened the tone of such a dark and foreboding topic. You have great imagination. (Report) Reply

  • C T Heart (1/3/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    Compact yet to the point. Hit the cherry with a poisonous dart...Great imagery used. a 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Alison Cassidy (12/31/2008 4:54:00 PM)

    Rage penned with irony and brevity. You are a cartoonist with words, Sathya. You bite the reader where it hurts. Great work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Mamta Agarwal (12/31/2008 5:25:00 AM)

    at your satirical best, full of angst and bathos. powerful and disturbing imagery.10


    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (12/31/2008 4:20:00 AM)

    wonderful imagery...a horrifying clearance sale for nuclear arsenal for mass destructions... (Report) Reply

  • Anjali Sinha (12/30/2008 9:18:00 PM)

    wow! ! ! ! ! ! a terrific clearance sale! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    so much salvo from your nuclear arsenal
    a differenet kinda theme--I liked it
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Seema Aarella (12/29/2008 9:14:00 PM)

    This means there is an endless supply of imaginative weaponry in your creative arsenal.......an entertaining write from otherwise an intense poet! (Report) Reply

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