sathya narayana

Rookie - 112 Points (12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

Auction - Poem by sathya narayana

New clearance sale! ! !
Satan brokered the deal
A salvo from nuclear arsenal
Knocked down bid final
Mr. Hades clinched all
Body wrappers are buried
Spirits are…… under dispatch


Comments about Auction by sathya narayana

  • Rookie Vaibhav Pandey (2/13/2009 11:55:00 AM)

    sir, very sarcastic indeed......a great write... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/12/2009 12:34:00 AM)

    A unique theme and presentation..Auctioned, clearance sale written so fine with great rhymes...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (2/8/2009 6:50:00 AM)

    a very imaginative piece there....opposing the use of nuclear weapons..thankgod at least the spirit is bought over by god (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Palas Kumar Ray (1/14/2009 12:51:00 PM)

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    Alas! We are AUCTIONED!
    _________________________________________ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eddie Roa (1/13/2009 5:10:00 AM)

    You have lightened the tone of such a dark and foreboding topic. You have great imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Kamran Haider (1/11/2009 8:02:00 AM)

    Wow... Bhayya, what an imagery... You have a great vision... Dark yet wonderful...10 ++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (1/3/2009 1:03:00 PM)

    A dramatic piece and so final - for now. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (1/3/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    Compact yet to the point. Hit the cherry with a poisonous dart...Great imagery used. a 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robert Jaffray (1/3/2009 6:10:00 AM)

    Mabye one day I will be able to pen such a great piece as this......Robert (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (12/31/2008 4:54:00 PM)

    Rage penned with irony and brevity. You are a cartoonist with words, Sathya. You bite the reader where it hurts. Great work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (12/31/2008 5:25:00 AM)

    at your satirical best, full of angst and bathos. powerful and disturbing imagery.10


    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 411 Points Ency Bearis (12/31/2008 4:20:00 AM)

    wonderful imagery...a horrifying clearance sale for nuclear arsenal for mass destructions... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (12/30/2008 9:18:00 PM)

    wow! ! ! ! ! ! a terrific clearance sale! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    so much salvo from your nuclear arsenal
    a differenet kinda theme--I liked it
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (12/30/2008 5:48:00 AM)

    Amazing imagery. You have a fascinating mind. Ten for you.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Seema Aarella (12/29/2008 9:14:00 PM)

    This means there is an endless supply of imaginative weaponry in your creative arsenal.......an entertaining write from otherwise an intense poet! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rinzu Susan Rajan (12/29/2008 8:34:00 AM)

    wow...u might have let ur imagination run wild to pen this one...

    good one really...! ! !

    : D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 29, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 1, 2009


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