Au Lac De Beratan Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A lovely poem for a lovely lady, that is the great thing about PH we get to speak to people from all over the world, well done Ahmad 10 Lynda xx

A great poem my friend, which contains a wonderful bloom of freshness Best wishes Jon

A befitting poem of appreciation for a lovely lady

this piece took me to a better place.

I agree with Leslie. It takes you to a better place. It was well described. I also liked the crisp wording. No wasting of words. Technically, very good. GW62

Wow, the wave pulls light out of the sea: what an idea! 'the wave pulls light out the sky blends seamlessly with artistry among hedges of bougainvillea sensuous curves of stone statues'. This is very splendid. So poetic and artistic.

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

Well done indeed, Ahmad.This is a wonderfully constructed write. good flow and incisive wording make this a pleasure to read. The dedication is pleasingly appropriate, as well. Great work my friend. Richard

You have blanketed Fiona with loving comparisons to the beauty without and within her. You accentuated her uniqueness with delicate contrasts of precious visual delights. Beautiful. A true joy. Yes, to truly share, I shall read her poems. Carol

nice vivid write..and great poem tribute to Fiona..