Attraction Poem by dr. ram sharma

Attraction



ATTRACTION
Enticing attraction,
A mute invitation,
I got myself from you,
Till i came near you,
You have provided me,
A new address every time,
I coldn`t became sad,
Till i remain with you,
You have devoted everything,
to love,
Your magic eyes,
providing me the attraction,
Your uncontrolled laughter,
How much pure it is! ,
Arises everytime,
A new ray of hope,
of attraction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Habib Abodunrin Zakari 16 January 2009

Hello Dr Ram. Try making some of your poems have stanzas; they sound better that way.The idea of stanza is as you have paragraph in ordinary writing. A stanza is to poem as as the latter is to writing; they both express a topic sentence.

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