Attraction Poem by Fred Omorogbe
Attraction
The notice, the interest, the cautious gaze
The wish to meet; to love or hate
The clash of eyes, desires relate
Bloated with pride...The spineless state.
Pretend and stall, 'good looks' as bait
Daydreams with ease... Mind boggling wait
Who makes the move, for heaven's sake
No end in sight... Bold step to take.
The Armour within; courage and faith
Backed up with sweet alluring grace
Few lies with Style, Intentions made
Submissive Smile... At last... A date!
appealing, wonderful write, dear poet.. a date process you've written dramatically..
You have great poetic potential. First step to Paradise Lost, very well penned.10/10 CP
sometimes being to cautious and afraid can be lost if not made a ten
This was neat and cleanly written. It had good rhymes and it was easy to follow in meaning. This was also well constructed with the bonus of a great ending. High marks for this one. Wonderful! GW62
Wow... the poem relates the confused feelings and actions went through in the process before finding and asking someone out. the constant break and almost flippant way you proceed from one stanza and in even word by word is insync with the feelings and actions that occur... you captured the message and want well... along with your word choice, your simplicity was well written and gave notice to the way it truly is... i am glad i got to write a comment for it... no recommendations but to keep writing
This is a poem with great truth in it. You've done well!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is really sweet, and has so much honesty with it.. Attraction is an app. title. Keep up the good work..... Bonnie