Attack Of The Snowflakes Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
Attack Of The Snowflakes Haiku
There is nothing like
being pelted by Heaven's
dizzy frozen tears
I wish Heaven would
quit crying so that Spring would
finally get here
White spirals downpour
Winter's avenging ninjas
disappear from sight
Wrong season snowfall
shouldn't happen at this time
Nature's ten foot mess
How can such tiny
feather light flakes reach such high
accumulation?
Was Heaven angry
when our planet rocked and rolled
wrapped like a snowball
Glacial planet
shaking to the music of
the sphere's legacy
What a cold promise
when the weather teases me
longing a Spring sign
I've come to realise
Winter, the mini-ice age
is Earth's sleepy time
I'm stuck shoveling
a ton of snowy cold ice
caused by climate change
I could really use
that global warming just send
it posthaste my way.
Hah! You took the sentiments right out of head. Wonderful, whimsical! !
Yes, I totally agree with you! ! Writen with much imagery... Bonnie
" being pelted by Heaven's. dizzy frozen tears" ... Such phrases are unforgettable, and they aptly convey your dismay. They make me feel as if I'm looking skyward as whirling flakes fall straight into my eyes. To my Favorites List!
This is really cute. I enjoyed it very much, and appreciate the amount of work that you must have put into it!
.such a delightful poem...........thanks for sharing it with us.........
How delightful! Such a pleasure to read...even now! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Hi Lorraine - Nice to meet a California Girl also nice to find a fellow Hiakuist! I am posting one about the months of the years. I like Haikus in bundles - one can write a real story. Well done 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I appreciate your distaste for winter at this time of year and your sense of humor. Some very original and creative thoughts.